Karel F. Suarez
Composition #6
Draft #3
December 07, 2009.
Letter to the Mayor of New York City
Dear Mayor Bloomberg:
I heard that you have received money and you have to think about the best way to use it. Two ideas are on the table, one is to improve the schools or the other is to improve a neighborhood. I believe that improving the schools is the best option because it will increase jobs, improve classrooms, and create new art programs.
By improving schools you can provide an opportunity for construction workers to find a job. In order to remodel schools it is important to hire painters, carpenters, and electricians. Currently the unemployment rate is very high. Hiring people to remodel the schools is going to lower unemployment which is also beneficial for the City. Secondly, it is also important to hire nurses because they can help if an accident happens. Sometimes students injure themselves while playing and sometimes they feel sick. Hiring nurses in schools not only will give students the attention they need, but will also the number of unemployment nurses are going to decrease. Finally, hiring a counselor would be helpful for the students. If the students have personal problems and they need to talk with someone, they can find help with the counselor. By hiring different workers you could improve the economy and also the schools.
In order to improve the classrooms three things are important. First of all, you could buy new computers and printers for the Computer Lab because ninety percent of the computers have the letters on the keys erased, the monitors have broken on and off buttons, and the laboratory does not have a printer. Secondly, classrooms don’t have a television and DVD player, which are important because teachers could use it in order to make the class more interesting and less monotonous. Finally, new desks are necessary too because many of the desks are missing the writing platform and students have to go to look for other desks in other classrooms. Students waste time and bother other teachers when they do this. Improving a classroom is important because students stay in the classroom seven hours per day and it is important that they have all the tools that they need to learn better.
In order to improve schools it is important to think about art classes such as music, dance, and painting. First of all, you could buy new musical instruments for the music class. Currently schools have a music program but they don’t have enough instruments and the students feel limited because they have to wait until somebody finishes to use the instrument. Sometimes the class ends and many students did not have the opportunity to play. By buying new instruments you would encourage students to develop their music abilities and give them the opportunity to train their talent. Secondly, hiring an art teacher is important because many schools don’t have an art program. Students who are interested in painting are going to have the opportunity to join this class and improve their talent and maybe in the future they could go to higher education and be successful in this area. Finally, schools need supplies for the dancing class. Floor mats and stretching poles are necessary for warm-up exercises so that the students will not injure themselves. Mirrors are also important because students have to see what they are doing and where they need to improve. Art classes are important to help the students develop their abilities in these fields.
Improving schools is the best option because you are going to be able to create new art programs, improve classrooms with new technology and desks, and help the unemployment rate by hiring different workers. This decision is also going to be important because people will remember this when the time to vote arrives.
Sincerely,
Karel F. Suarez.
Composition #6
Draft #3
December 07, 2009.
Letter to the Mayor of New York City
Dear Mayor Bloomberg:
I heard that you have received money and you have to think about the best way to use it. Two ideas are on the table, one is to improve the schools or the other is to improve a neighborhood. I believe that improving the schools is the best option because it will increase jobs, improve classrooms, and create new art programs.
By improving schools you can provide an opportunity for construction workers to find a job. In order to remodel schools it is important to hire painters, carpenters, and electricians. Currently the unemployment rate is very high. Hiring people to remodel the schools is going to lower unemployment which is also beneficial for the City. Secondly, it is also important to hire nurses because they can help if an accident happens. Sometimes students injure themselves while playing and sometimes they feel sick. Hiring nurses in schools not only will give students the attention they need, but will also the number of unemployment nurses are going to decrease. Finally, hiring a counselor would be helpful for the students. If the students have personal problems and they need to talk with someone, they can find help with the counselor. By hiring different workers you could improve the economy and also the schools.
In order to improve the classrooms three things are important. First of all, you could buy new computers and printers for the Computer Lab because ninety percent of the computers have the letters on the keys erased, the monitors have broken on and off buttons, and the laboratory does not have a printer. Secondly, classrooms don’t have a television and DVD player, which are important because teachers could use it in order to make the class more interesting and less monotonous. Finally, new desks are necessary too because many of the desks are missing the writing platform and students have to go to look for other desks in other classrooms. Students waste time and bother other teachers when they do this. Improving a classroom is important because students stay in the classroom seven hours per day and it is important that they have all the tools that they need to learn better.
In order to improve schools it is important to think about art classes such as music, dance, and painting. First of all, you could buy new musical instruments for the music class. Currently schools have a music program but they don’t have enough instruments and the students feel limited because they have to wait until somebody finishes to use the instrument. Sometimes the class ends and many students did not have the opportunity to play. By buying new instruments you would encourage students to develop their music abilities and give them the opportunity to train their talent. Secondly, hiring an art teacher is important because many schools don’t have an art program. Students who are interested in painting are going to have the opportunity to join this class and improve their talent and maybe in the future they could go to higher education and be successful in this area. Finally, schools need supplies for the dancing class. Floor mats and stretching poles are necessary for warm-up exercises so that the students will not injure themselves. Mirrors are also important because students have to see what they are doing and where they need to improve. Art classes are important to help the students develop their abilities in these fields.
Improving schools is the best option because you are going to be able to create new art programs, improve classrooms with new technology and desks, and help the unemployment rate by hiring different workers. This decision is also going to be important because people will remember this when the time to vote arrives.
Sincerely,
Karel F. Suarez.
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